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A Video I Cooked Up For A School Project

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McStudz

Well, here I was in BORING french class, and my teacher gives us an assignment. The main point is to be able to use Future Tense in some advertisement... IN FRENCH. At first, I was thinking about doing a commercial for "Redneck Tech" but then a friend of mine (Known here as TravisTouchdown) gave me an idea: Make an Aperture Science Investment Opportunity video.

So, TravisTouchdown was in charge of getting the camera, lemons, translating, and being the "scientist" in the video, and I put all the clips together with Windows Movie Maker, as well as writing the English script. Oh, and I also did the Cave Johnson voice.

I did a French version and an English version (posting the English version on YouTube). I put my heart and soul into this video, and apparently, "Heart and soul" = 77% for my mark on the French project. Oh, well...

I'll let you guys be the judge. Here's the English version. Tell me what you think of it!

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Addictgamer

I found this pretty entertaining.

A finishing touch would have been having some music.

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McJobless

Your Visual Effect department could use some work. I could tell it was fake...only just, but still...

BUT SERIOUSLY, it's alright. I agree with addict on the music; using something from one of those old 50's commercials would have enhanced the comical value of this video. And if you ever need explosives, just ask me. I can rig you up with some awesome bang.

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Rock Raider fan no.1

at around 0:38 this caption should be: Nice job breaking it hero

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Phoenyx

A bit of fitting background music would be good (rhythm line for still alive, anyone?), and a vignette always helps in the style category.

Your transitions could use a little touching up, too. I'm probably asking a bit too much though - I'm used to videos like Concrete Hustle and Theft of the Viridian Crystal.

Still, other than that it's quite well made.

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