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Sneek Peek: Dementia


Zephyria

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Here's a sneek peak to a story I'm writing, Entitled "Dementia"

Pain. Searing pain. It's all I could feel. It overtook all my senses. I slowly opened my eyes, I saw darkness...nothing but darkness. As slowly as I opened them, I closed my eyes, drifting off into sleep again. I don't even remember much of what happened. I just remember rainfall, and a flash...

-Several weeks later-

I jolt awake, the pain having dulled, but not completely left me. But now...I feel almost nothing where my left arm should be. I try to move it, but strangely find I can't. I slowly force my eyes open, and am blinded by the bright lights that seem to be penetrating my eyes. Slowly, a few minutes later, after my eyes completely adjust to the hospital room, I attempt to move my head to the side. Finding that I can't, I attempt to mutter an explitary under my breath, but am unable to form coherent words.

"f***!" I thought, as my mind drifted back into the cold grasps of sleep.

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Even just based on this preview, could you PLEASE turn it into an Point-And-Click Adventure Game?

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maybe i can use make a scary as hell horror fps game out of it as my second game. if i got permission of you to make it and its being sold it will be 50/50 for the money.

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