I am satisfied with the result. Maybe just change the ending a bit. It sounds a little abrupt in my opinion.

Ooh, nice. Not loud either. (or maybe my speakers are on low ) The instruments you used worked in nice with its sort of theme, though I did think that the high one (that comes in at the middle) was too warble-ly.

The ending seems fine to me.

I am satisfied with the result. Maybe just change the ending a bit. It sounds a little abrupt in my opinion.

 

Yeah, I agree. I actually had no idea how to do the outtro, so I just got myself a echoed full stop there. I'll try something different the next time, though.

 

 

Ooh, nice. Not loud either. (or maybe my speakers are on low ) The instruments you used worked in nice with its sort of theme, though I did think that the high one (that comes in at the middle) was too warble-ly.

The ending seems fine to me.

 

I haven't done any mastering whatsoever, so it's probably about 6 to 9DB less loud than other "professional" music. And, I think you're talking about the arpeggiated bells I'm using as a accent/filler in the mid-section. I should probably have filtered those to make them less annoying. Thanks for your feedback, though!

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I am no musician, so I cannot pass judgement like certain other people (), but I must say I like the lower volume. Some times other songs are just way to loud for me.

 

As for the ending being abrupt, eh, I'd like it to be a bit different, but that's about it.